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Fading

Fading you lose my secrets one by one they skip or stumble broken thoughts your fingers float around my face as if touch restores remembrance words lose you names slide through mazes, slip into dark desperation I lose you with sharp edges of knives that cut ties as if they have always been loose I write you into words to fasten you we need to learn what let go means *** Copyright © Darren White August 9, 2018

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Date: 10/2/2018 2:11:00 AM
Wow. Letting go. I am always amazed reading your poetry. It is often very sad, but (if you do not mind me saying) reveal so much strength. Many kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 9/1/2018 9:05:00 AM
Lots of emotions in these lines! I was thinking of you last week. Nice to read you this morning! Have a blessed day!
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Date: 8/27/2018 12:32:00 AM
Fine write, sentiments expressed touch deeply within.
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Date: 8/20/2018 3:35:00 AM
This poem is outstanding and puts into words so brilliantly how I sometimes feel. Wonderful Darren! : )
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Date: 8/15/2018 1:42:00 PM
Perfection as always Darren.
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Date: 8/9/2018 10:57:00 AM
Simply gorgeous writing <3
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Date: 8/9/2018 7:37:00 AM
Wow. I can feel the weight of this one on my chest. Literally dude. Your penetrating Free Verse at it's best my dear friend. A fave. Love and hugs Sweet P, xo ton mo <3
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