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Faded Love

He never said - I’m sorry He never said - I care He never said - I love you Trough all those years we shared He never said - my darling He never said - my love He never said - my sweetheart Nothing from the above He never said - you pretty He never said - you’re nice He never showed affection His heart was cold like ice My lonely years went by My love faded it away There was nothing left anymore There was nothing more left to say He left me with broken heart Without even goodbye I had no tears anymore I had no tears to cry

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Susan Palli

Date: 12/17/2012 9:51:00 AM

Devastating! So sorry!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/9/2012 2:22:00 PM

What a long and painful journey this person traveled in the absence of true love...I enjoyed the tempo of this write. Have a blessed weekend. gwendolen

Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 12/9/2012 7:38:00 PM

You right, long and painful journey, but that’s in the past, and now that person can say, life is beautiful.... Thank you for stopping by.... :)

David Nickle Read

Date: 12/7/2012 2:09:00 AM

Beautifully sad sentiments, maybe such things happen so that when we all find true love, we love more. The emotions your poem bring to the surface follow and change with every verse as one reads them. Great words well written. Read ;{>

Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 12/8/2012 7:17:00 PM

You right, everything changes when we find a true love, thank you David for a beautiful comment...:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2012 12:40:00 AM

So sad ..... never a loving word. - Touching, but a well-written poem Elizabeth. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 12/8/2012 7:11:00 PM

Such a sweet comment, thank you Anne Lise...:)