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FADED I was visible once but now one of the forgotten ones. I faded away slowly imperceptibly, like the once vibrant colour of blue jeans. My edges frayed as I walked along the road of fleeting popularity. I felt my fabric thinning until I became comfortable. It made me kinda cool in a way. I was paired with shirts and sweaters until a time later other clothes seemed better. My holes became too noticeable, instead of somewhat perceptible. The day came when I was just a bit out of style. So you washed and folded me carefully put me on a shelf. After all, I was a favourite. No one wants to throw a favourite away. Right there in the closet I stayed, next to all the pretty new things. I waited craving the day you might wear me again. But somehow, things just are what they are. Faded old blue jeans inexplicably disappear. If you ever do find them you smile and remember how they made you feel. Sadly though, when you try them on, they just don't fit anymore.

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Date: 10/2/2023 3:22:00 AM
Ha! Enjoyed this. Just now reading because I had been away from the soup for months. I do that. Stay away months then return engaged fully. Then leave again. Lol. Belated congrats on potw.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/2/2023 6:27:00 AM
Thanks for the congrats and for your visit.
Date: 9/10/2023 6:23:00 AM
Back with huge congrats on POTW with this keeper Richard! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2023 6:58:00 AM
Thanks so much.
Date: 9/8/2023 1:04:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w., Richard :) - hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2023 4:59:00 AM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 9/7/2023 7:48:00 AM
Love your creative way of acknowledging aging.....congratulations on your POTW. Paulette
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2023 11:07:00 AM
Thanks for giving my poem a read.
Date: 9/7/2023 5:33:00 AM
BUT WAIT....They are cutting holes in their blue jeans now.....to make them look...you know....like...kinda.....worn, and worthy of admiration. Great write Richard...I think most over 40 can relate
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2023 7:10:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by John.
Date: 9/6/2023 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW. Well done.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/7/2023 7:11:00 AM
Thanks for reading.
Date: 9/4/2023 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Richard, on your brilliant POTW. We get attached to some clothing, and simply can not get rid of it, because of the memories it brings. Beautiful Personification - enjoyed this fabulous piece.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2023 5:14:00 AM
So true. Thanks for the read and commenting congrats. ;0)
Date: 9/4/2023 5:18:00 AM
Nice personification Richard. Seen a lot of these lately. My wife would like this. She can't throw away anything lol
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/4/2023 6:03:00 AM
Kind of like us guys and underwear. *lol*
Date: 9/4/2023 4:11:00 AM
I loved how you personified your clothing. Mine sometimes speak to me from my closet begging, "Please wear me outside. I need sunshine." Sadly, those items are in the back of my closet reminding me of younger, thinner days. :-) Congrats on Poem of the Week, Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/4/2023 6:02:00 AM
Clothing can be cruel at times. Thanks for reading and the kind congratulations.
Date: 9/4/2023 1:34:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your well deserved award for poem of the week… Belle
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/4/2023 6:01:00 AM
Much appreciated. It was a pleasant surprise.
Date: 9/3/2023 8:50:00 PM
I have a couple of pairs of jeans just as you subscribe ... folded in a drawer. I pull them out a few times a year to try them on ... they just seem to have lost their ability to stretch. lol Congratulations on your POTD, Rick. Enjoy your special week of recognition! Bill
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/4/2023 6:00:00 AM
Good one. My new jeans are a stretchy material. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 9/3/2023 5:57:00 PM
Your words are a treasure, indeed ! Not folded and placed on a shelf, but shinning like a chandelier; for all to enjoy. Congratulations Richard, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2023 6:56:00 PM
Thanks so much. It was a pleasant surprise. Hugs Rick.
Date: 9/3/2023 3:32:00 PM
Back with congratulations on POTW ! Hugs, Susan :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2023 5:14:00 PM
Much appreciated.
Date: 9/3/2023 12:48:00 PM
Richard, a well penned poem, we all have that one favorite pair of jeans and wish they would fit forever, congratulations on POTW!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2023 12:59:00 PM
Thanks Tania.
Date: 9/3/2023 9:29:00 AM
Gosh Richard. I still wear my old jeans - to heck with trendy - give me classic! Seriously, metaphorically beautiful and eloquently written. Congratulations on POTW! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2023 10:59:00 AM
Thanks so much. Great comment.
Date: 9/3/2023 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. A wonderful/true write. Great ending. I must say, some are not jeans but still loved. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2023 10:59:00 AM
You as well, thanks.
Date: 9/3/2023 6:36:00 AM
My favourite jeans are faded and folded, I hope to wear them again one day, I know they won’t fit, but one can wish. Enjoyed the read, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the week… Belle
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2023 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Belle, what a pleasant surprise.
Date: 9/3/2023 6:09:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Richard. Enjoy your special week!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2023 6:18:00 AM
What a wonderful surprise. Thanks for letting me know.
Date: 9/3/2023 5:52:00 AM
Beautifully expressed .
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/3/2023 5:56:00 AM
Thanks for reading. I tend to be a bit more verbose. I appreciate the brevity you write with.
Date: 9/2/2023 11:45:00 AM
This reminded me that the truly classic most often is sourced in what is truly familiar. In my area, we hippies were the 1st generation who made jeans urban as opposed to being “farmer’s clothes” before. & we did wear them stiff to smooth. This is a lovely & like jeans, comfortable poem, tho no to fold away. Thanks too for stopping by my pg XOX
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/2/2023 1:51:00 PM
My pleasure. I’m pleased you enjoyed my poem. ;0)
Date: 9/2/2023 7:28:00 AM
The nuances of life lived , enjoyed in style and popularity brought to sensation by your favorite blue jeans . Deep, thoughtful and a bit melancholy. Memories of time gone by . I loved taking this journey with you . I love memories of my favorite jeans . I have missed your poems Richard. I hope you are smiling . Hugs, Susan :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/2/2023 10:31:00 AM
Hi Susan, yes I am smiling. Thanks for your visit.
Date: 9/1/2023 8:22:00 PM
Faded, but not forgotten. Life is filled with patches, moments placed on a shelf. Always remember that, memories last forever. My best to you, Richard. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/2/2023 10:32:00 AM
To you as well. Great comment. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 9/1/2023 5:10:00 PM
I really love this kind of poem. I still recall my favorite bell bottoms and it bums me out I don't know how they disappeared
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/2/2023 10:33:00 AM
I remember my bell bottom jeans and my platform shoes. I’m pleased you enjoyed my poem Andrea.
Date: 9/1/2023 1:32:00 PM
Richard, great poetry. Could be about clothes, people, aging- yes.? Best wishes~ Warren.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/1/2023 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Warren.
Date: 9/1/2023 7:04:00 AM
So you washed and folded me carefully put me on a shelf. After all, I was a favorite. No one wants to throw a favorite away---superb vocabulary, Richard. An awesome metaphoric write that also speaks eloquently to journey of life.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/1/2023 10:03:00 AM
Much appreciated my friend.
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