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Faces of Loneliness

Furtive glances mask the needs Improperly. Her stillness wait inside The fear where trust silently recedes Of her hugging her mother's side One day she left him in silence too His eyes meeting no ones straight And so they laughed and never knew Why he stands only at the gate I have no need for therapy or balm My only cloak is this ancient faith The second coming keeps me calm And makes me different though they hate Him upon th cross, abandoned so He thought, wincing at rejection I saw his face haggard with woe And all our faces cornered by alienation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/23/2013 8:21:00 PM
David, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:21:00 PM
well done David... PD
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Date: 10/21/2013 10:59:00 AM
Well done! You told of the greatest loneliness I could ever imagine...Congrats on your winning placement, David! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/21/2013 8:24:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, David
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Date: 10/20/2013 6:58:00 PM
wow...great write....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/18/2013 7:45:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem tonight...congratulations on your win....
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Date: 10/12/2013 7:09:00 AM
so full of meaning, good work xxx
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