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Face to Face

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Face to Face

Face to face at last

Perpetual gaze is held

No words are spoken

Hands reaching out with purpose

You grab the last cookie first 


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  1. Date: 2/18/2011 5:27:00 AM
    Just wonderful, I loved your sweet Tanka~~

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 2:16:00 PM
    wow killer last line I can smell the cookies!remember punctuation and capitalization not used in japanese forms [they count the sounds and they give a different sound to indicate surprise which would add to the sound count, so, they don't use punctuation]

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 1:39:00 AM
    smiles indeed!! wasn't expecting that! haha a sort of quick draw on cookies ;) very very cute ;) enjoyed this one, Shar :)

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 6:14:00 PM
    OH, my I LOVE THIS. HIGHEST Rating!

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 5:49:00 PM
    Ha Ha but who? the crumbs! enjoyed this light hearted piece Sharon.

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 5:33:00 PM
    Very romantic Tanka with a humorous ending----enjoyed---kashinath

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 4:35:00 PM
    Good one..Enjoyed the surprise humorous ending..Sara

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 4:17:00 PM
    Cute little tanka. Thanks for posting this.

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 4:03:00 PM
    Sweet as u Shar and such a romantic Tanka too.. feeling the emotion my friend with luv..