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Face of Truth

look into the owls face in large eyes a bird of great wisdom weeping in a dark veil tears flowing in darkened sight take a walk with me writing in the clouds surrounded in mist mourning a loss of one's heart within a soul staring into darkness abyss of emptiness cold colourless i see truth written in the wall echoes in the deep covered in shadows a cobweb mist barely blinking i got lost burdened with hurt loves light gives me direction in the war love against hate you never loved me it prevailed light's champion i mourned the death of a love that died

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/15/2013 1:39:00 PM
Really forlorn emotions portrayed here Liam. But I hope this is now something of the past. Beautifully crafted.
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Date: 9/12/2013 10:09:00 PM
heartbreaking and beautiful I love your style good job Liam
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Date: 9/12/2013 3:17:00 PM
Heartbreaking poem..It hurts when those who should care wouldn' t..It kills us silently..but its better to know the truth than living a lie.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/12/2013 3:56:00 PM
I LIVED THE LIE TOOK SO LONG TO FIND THE TRUTH THATS THE KILLER BLIND AND STUPID THANK YOU CHARMAINE YOUR A BEAUTIFUL FRIEND HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
Date: 9/12/2013 7:52:00 AM
This is such a heart-felt write..I really love this art piece..Awesome imagery...Love is something special.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/12/2013 3:52:00 PM
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT AMAZING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Book: Shattered Sighs