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Fable's Dreamland

Oh, bubbles float through summer breeze as children sneak in hushed delight, where fables reel under young trees to glide away like jewels bright. Now listen...elves and gnomes hop with peek-a-boos spinning tag games in dreamy land where stars eavesdrop; creating tricks with playful names. And dusk invites more bouncing glee, as ribbons knot Queen Fey’s gold stick like wiggles on anklets, how free to laugh around while clouds frolic. Here, fancies of new summer ring when kiddies shout, "let's pirouette", from tale’s wonder... a night singing before the day ends their minuet! Fable Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 3/11/2017 10:56:00 PM
Hi Nette, I really enjoyed this fable. Great imagery as well. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 3/11/2017 9:09:00 PM
Wonderful fable, Nette, congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/18/2014 2:53:00 PM
Nette,, Congratulations, on your awesome Fable ..... Always~ Linda
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Date: 7/17/2014 6:52:00 PM
Very pretty. congratulations on our win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/16/2014 10:06:00 AM
Congrats on yor fantastic top wining poem! Fairyland fun in jolly rhyme! Warm wishes nette.
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Date: 7/16/2014 8:52:00 AM
Very nice tale, Nette! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/16/2014 1:22:00 AM
Beautiful write Nette,, congrats on top place win!
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Date: 7/15/2014 7:36:00 PM
Simply enchanting - a worthy winner:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/15/2014 12:09:00 PM
This was a beautifully developed write! Beautifully written piece.
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Date: 3/10/2014 6:29:00 PM
This was a wonderful, whimsical poem, Nette. I enjoyed this so much. An enchanting write! Good luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the great comments! :)
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Date: 3/9/2014 11:12:00 PM
Who doesn't love to blow those bubbles....and this is a magical sumer fun poem nett..sure to be on top.
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:06:00 AM
So playful and fun. A joy to read.
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:06:00 AM
Great flow in this one..If for a contest, reads like winning material..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2014 11:02:00 PM
You certainly brought the child out from within me! Each line lit me up with a smile of tenderness and joy of being a child! You are a genius of a poet my friend! Was this a challenge for you, because it seemed to flow so easily throughout your poem! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!
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Date: 3/7/2014 8:15:00 PM
This is very beautiful Nette. Sometimes I wish I lived in a fairy land. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 3/7/2014 5:35:00 PM
Very artistic, beautiful setting for an escape from our troubled world - your dreamland! Tiaua.
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Date: 3/7/2014 2:54:00 PM
love this truly magical piece, Nette
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Date: 3/7/2014 2:06:00 PM
An exciting delve into the garden of dreams where the imagination frolics unconstrained...
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Date: 3/7/2014 1:41:00 PM
- If I become 99 years ..... I will always have a bit of "child" in my soul ..... dreams, joy and a little adventure .... Nice to read your lovely poem, Nette. - ALWAYS!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 1:24:00 PM
Enchantment ...A world escape to magic..Yes these are such feelings you transmitted in this poem.Happy Friday sweet Nette...Make the best of it..Hugs
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Date: 3/7/2014 1:07:00 PM
This could not be more delightful.....and makes one want to be childlike again. A frolic through each stanza.... Love it !!
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