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First of all, he was living walking dead Out and about chicken without a head Rather than facing fears, he hid and cowered Then found the nerve to care, he was forty years forward Yes, he was getting old, and for life renewed, he had to be bold. Facing fog, demons; living was still his thing, but Only he could reach himself, deep within Real people strut and smile with their head held high To be or not to be, he was not ashamed to cry Yesterday was gone; today he's on podium singing his own song. *

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Date: 1/30/2016 10:06:00 PM
Forty plus Forty is Eighty. Just kidding around. Very creative doubling up. Extremely intelligent. A7
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 1/31/2016 2:11:00 PM
Hi Daniel, twiddled around and came up with it; just changed gender, been there done that. Hope your weekend is simply delightful.
Date: 1/30/2016 11:23:00 AM
39 forever..lol
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Matt Mcqueeney
Date: 1/31/2016 5:50:00 PM
Thanks Iris...you too
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 1/31/2016 2:14:00 PM
Okay Matthew. That, too, like all age, is special. Have a sunshiny day.
Date: 1/30/2016 11:22:00 AM
Nice write, I can really identify
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 1/31/2016 2:15:00 PM
Been there done that; just felt like changing she to he.

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