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Gulf breeze chime my chimes What I say here pass it on Spring fling beckoning. Infatuation - A cat chases its own tail Love begins at home. Elusive wind blows Bliss is like falling in love I claim nostalgia. Wrapped kisses with rose A lonely hunter shivers Love last a life time. *

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/16/2016 9:33:00 AM

great quality with wonderful fitting of words and lines. The grace from this page is worth more than a 7. Visiting your pages always come with meeting my expectations and with this I say "Keep on writing please".. So so incredible.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/16/2016 2:37:00 PM

thank U dear funom. U so inspire.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/9/2016 12:04:00 PM

A delightful haiku string, although I have to admit I have a preference for the 3rd one! ~ Regards // paul

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/13/2016 8:39:00 AM

I do 2 Paul. Thanks for visiting again.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/4/2016 10:31:00 AM

Iris, thanks for the kind reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/3/2016 9:22:00 PM

I love the elusive feel, you have a lovely way of making your readers see and feel the perfect imagery. Thanks for expressing the beauty of love. A perfect 7 for your haiku. LINDA

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/4/2016 8:44:00 AM

Thanks dear one. Hugs.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 2/3/2016 7:04:00 PM

A lovely nest

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/4/2016 8:45:00 AM

I like that... lovelyness.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/2/2016 7:03:00 PM

so nice of you to drop by I thought you might be interested in this, take a peek?http://www.graceguts.com/essays/haiku-checklist Light & Love

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/3/2016 6:45:00 PM

Thank you Debbie. Checking.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/2/2016 6:40:00 PM

very beautiful string of haiku Iris:-) hugs Jan xx

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/2/2016 6:47:00 PM

Thank you Jan, as always; you inspire me. Have a lovely cozy evening dear one.

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2016 2:39:00 PM

Hi Iris, I live near the Gulf, the first haiku is my favorite. :) Love the forever feeling in every haiku. I shall rate this with a 7. In which I hardly give sevens on haiku. Thanks for the lovely haiku. SKAT

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/2/2016 6:39:00 AM

And so you enjoy its breeze, like we do in Belize. Thank you dear one, always warm and inspiring.