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A short slender stick, I used to jot down the word "flames"- in the sunny sandy shore. I wrote our names, crossed out those the same with excitement and hope that my counting ended in love. My cheeks turned to pale; because it was only a friend, I tried again then mumbled: better luck to the next crush. The high tide came and washed out all, I left.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/27/2020 11:12:00 AM
Hello Maris Tuazon, I guess the flames died out. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/28/2020 6:18:00 AM
Hello Mariis,your welcome. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Maris Warrior Tuazon
Date: 8/27/2020 4:30:00 PM
Thank you Darlene for dropping by and reading my piece.Have a pleasant day as well. Keep safe.

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