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Eyes Wide Open

~**~ There are somethings in my mind Things even I don't want to find I want paint the town grey Instead of red In the ebony shadow of yesterday When did this these walls begin bleeding Like the lunar eclipse and the burnt red sky Red like your lovers lips. Dangling salvation in front of their noses Smelling black roses Time like tomorrow just out of reach Chrome stars a million miles away. Close your eyes from hidden scars You're color blind... I blow to the silver moon a liar's kiss Yesterdays memories so blue Contentedly picking up the pieces of today. ~**~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/30/2013 9:17:00 AM
Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that there's another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.
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Date: 11/4/2012 12:42:00 PM
Love this powerful write, Tracie. Sorry it's taken so long to say thanks - I enjoyed your contests : )
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Date: 11/4/2012 7:40:00 AM
you have created a lot of beauty and deep emotion with your words, tray.. i'm dumfounded; lovely... thanks for making me a part of your recent contest; i enjoyed the macabre mood, lol... huggs and miss ya!..:)
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Date: 11/3/2012 5:50:00 AM
great job with this poem.. I loved the picture you paint with your words.. love ya cory
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Date: 10/30/2012 7:49:00 AM
Tracie ,it's wonderful to see this new poem you have posted recently. Your poems are so profound but also I love the imagery of ones like this. thanks for my contest win. Luv, andrea
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Date: 10/30/2012 6:35:00 AM
great write Tracie,wonderful write
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Date: 10/30/2012 12:46:00 AM
AMAZING POETRY TRACIE .. FASCINATING AND FABULOUS INTENSITY LUV .. THANKXX FOR MY FIRST PLACE WIN IN SPOOKY KU .. IT WAS SO FUN AND A GREAT CHALLENGE FOR HALLOWEEN FLAVOR .. SO APPRECIATE THE TOP SPOT WITH SO MANY WONDERFUL POES TOO ..
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Date: 10/28/2012 11:02:00 AM
Wow, what powerful words you have here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous and delightfully intriguing poem this afternoon! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/28/2012 7:45:00 AM
Ruben is correct!!! One of your best T2... you do what you do so well... luv n hugs Michael
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