Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


BL Devnath Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled EYES ON FISH which was written by poet BL Devnath. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by BL Devnath

Best BL Devnath Poems

+ Fav Poet


                                                           fisher man
                                                  fishing creel in hands
                                                        stuck with mud 

                                                         crane near by
                                                  jumps here and there
                                                           eyes on fish

Copyright © BL Devnath

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 2/16/2013 8:32:00 PM
    this is really cute. The man and the crane both waiting on that fish!!

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 4:23:00 AM
    amazing picture your haiku creates

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:09:00 PM
    Enjoyed your haiku, BL! Good work. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:11:00 PM
    BL, i can imagine everyone ready for the perfect catch... good haikus....PD

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:31:00 PM
    Fish eyes ......... watery .... lifeless eyes, nasty ..... lol. - Well done bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)