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Eyes of Hourglass

Deep in the eyes of you, The edge of the rift looses ground to my grip, But strong forces that orbit my vibe ,my being , My seeing of a complex covex figure Stop gazing upon my soul trying to read me Decieve me you jugde me to blood see The eyes of a flame being black,leaving shadows to cracks Reflection of section the spark full flame and in front of my name was a small picture frame which contained memories of the past never to be found again. Much Love Richard Q. Corbett

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/19/2009 4:18:00 PM
the title is the key that bring it all together. very good. john
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Date: 2/19/2009 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura
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Date: 2/18/2009 10:44:00 AM
Interesting title/write here, Richard. One little thing though ... smile ... the word "judge" has letters backwards on Line 6 and also deceive is part of that rule of "i before e except after c" ... so please excuse my english teacher obsession and know that this is a very well deserved selection to be a feature this week here at the soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/17/2009 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations Richard, on your lyric "Eyes Of Hourglass" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 2/15/2009 9:51:00 PM
Richard - Congratulations on having your poem featured this week - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/7/2009 7:08:00 AM
Sad one, but nicely done! Has a bittersweet feel. ~ Carrie
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