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Eyes of Causation

Fiery eyes of crimson tide as a captain looks upon haunted ships, what once was, but no more eyes filled with heavy tears as darkness floods the heart's chambers, wars raged and lost, the innocent and brave fought the unseen tales foretold. Hungry eyes of vultures, lions and insatiable alike, pursue pray with eyes watery glaze, ever so softly, ever so suddenly a life which is no more, remains. Loving eyes of the passionate, hopeful, full of adoration, one stare in each other's eyes a lifetime of promise awaits. Eyes closed, eternity of solitude, infinite hours of timeless wonder, heaven in a soul's reach a reality that is yet to be explored.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/21/2016 8:21:00 PM
LOVE THIS A SECOND TIME AROUND
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Date: 3/8/2014 2:20:00 PM
Hi Erika, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/7/2014 7:37:00 AM
very beautiful poem.
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Date: 3/6/2014 7:58:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Erika :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/6/2014 7:01:00 AM
Beautiful poem Erika, hoping to see more of this. Thumbs up and good luck.... Lekau
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Date: 3/5/2014 2:25:00 PM
Erika, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/5/2014 2:07:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Erika :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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