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Eyes of Blue

In his blue eyes I see the skies, I see the ocean too. I dream, I soar, wanting more. Mesmerized by those eyes of blue. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 12/06/2015 written by Francine Roberts for nette' s contest "Through Your Eyes". visual #4, 25 words

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David Mohn

Date: 6/22/2015 7:56:00 PM

This is beautifully dreamy Francine...congrats!

Skat A

Date: 6/22/2015 4:34:00 PM

Francine:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2015 3:43:00 PM

Nice win. PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2015 3:13:00 PM

simply beautiful!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2015 3:13:00 PM

oh,and congrats too!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/22/2015 10:34:00 AM

Well done Francine; in a few words you mesmerize with blue eyes! Congratulations...a deserved win! // paul

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/22/2015 2:31:00 AM

his eyes shine out Francine lovely congrats on win hugs

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/22/2015 2:30:00 AM

his eyes shine out Francine lovely congrats on win hugs

M.N.I.W M.N.I.W

Date: 6/21/2015 11:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem.

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/21/2015 10:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Francine! Well done :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/21/2015 9:15:00 PM

Congrats on your fine win my friend, great poem. I found the 25 word limitation stifling when I wrote my entry but contest requirements had to be followed. Great contest theme...