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Eyes of An Angel

when I looked in her eyes I got lost for a moment. Hypnotized by her Beauty I had fallen in love. I realized I was staring as she began to smile my heart beating fast I haven't felt this way in a while. Butterflies in my stomach infatuated with curiosity I started to get nervous with a little anxiety. Something came over me so I went home and looked it up. I found out I fell in love and I couldn't get back up.

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Skat A

Date: 1/23/2016 9:35:00 PM

MARCUS:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~

Marcus Pimentel
Date: 1/24/2016 12:33:00 AM

Thank you!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2016 10:44:00 PM

Hi Marcu, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 1/8/2016 9:40:00 AM

Marcus,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Marcus Pimentel
Date: 1/8/2016 10:11:00 AM

Hi SKAT I'm new at this I never posted my poems b4 but thanks for your comments