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Eyes Filled of Rose

@};- Promiscuous rose Bathing in glints of the sun I couldn’t resist @};-

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Paul Stacey

Date: 5/27/2009 3:58:00 AM

I think this is what a haiku should be- beautiful

Date: 5/23/2009 4:24:00 PM

Glad you didn't resist because I enjoyed reading this one. Nice artistic touch too. Keep on writing. Karen

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/22/2009 6:07:00 PM

Faints in complete delight.... This is so beautiful I could live in it. Stunning Haiku James.

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/22/2009 12:41:00 PM

B E A U T I F U L

Jonay Washington

Date: 5/21/2009 10:25:00 PM

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/21/2009 6:38:00 PM

Oh that prmiscuous rose...wonderful write...wow. BG

P Sheart

Date: 5/21/2009 6:01:00 PM

Hi James Beautifully written. I can smell the aroma of that lovely rose. I agree with Christian, that first line is perfecto! A perfect Haiku! Thanks for your welcome comment on my latest. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/21/2009 5:59:00 PM

Wow. Truly awesome! Complete with artwork too! Excellent haiku. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/21/2009 5:33:00 PM

The first line is amazing...love that..wonderful haiku..good work.