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Eyes Closed Tight

I’ve walked the roads with eyes closed tight On summers days and winters nights Never a car nor a van saw I Just me, the road and the cloudy sky My knees were bare and my face was too Braced to meet what the weather threw At my frail form as it made its way From home to school and back each day Three miles to school my legs would ply Bag on my back tear in my eye From biting wind and driving rain And ill fitting shoes causing me much pain In class at last I start to thaw As the teacher with the chalk did draw The questions on the board of black She’d shout at us if we dared to slack The bell has gone and it’s home time I run out past the village sign Turn right and up the old mill path Which cuts my journey time in half Past fields where corn and barley grew Not yet turning their golden hue But standing now quite strong and tall Hiding the Corncrake, but not her call For years my legs would carry me From breakfast plate to Geography From Latin to the river Bann Then up the hill to home I ran How lucky I was I realise now To see the birds the sheep the cow And share with them the air and rain Such freedom will we ever see again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/14/2014 10:51:00 AM
The ears have it on that solemn road. For if you can't hear, with eyes shut, you might end up a dead toad. But walking backwards to save your face. I know too well, that winter race. But the rural pastures that you passed. Are truly memories that were meant to last. Thanks for bringing us along. Peace. :)
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/14/2014 2:25:00 PM
thank you Robert for your lovely reply. I am going to pop by just as soon as I have replied to my comments. Regards Andy Lyle
Date: 2/13/2014 10:22:00 AM
Hello Robert I'm one of Peter's friends, read his poem which led me to you.I didn't find your walk home lonely, rather filled with life..and nature's comfort.Having to walk three miles myself through a city, I found your walk filled with pictured memories not the gray of sidewalks and buildings..I'll find you again...nice work
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/13/2014 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Frederic for your kind review.It was far from lonely I had the sheep that I fed with apples cows following me behind the hedges dogs at the houses I passed. Birds nests to check on, dragonfly larvae in the streams to catch and the added advantage of being able to walk in the middle of the road with my eyes closed
Date: 2/13/2014 1:31:00 AM
Hi Robert, I,m peters cousin, what a beautiful poem this is, I could almost feel your pain wearing those shoes and the feel of the cold on your face, it seems you had a lonely trip to school everyday. It must have been enjoyable in the summertime though. Look forward to reading more of your work.
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/13/2014 7:38:00 AM
Hi Susan thank you for looking at my poems. I am glad you liked it . It is just a snippet from my school days. 3 miles down hill to school then 3 miles up hill home again. Ireland has a beauty all of her own all year round. lucky to have had such freedom in my youth. Thank you once again for your kind comments Andy lyle
Date: 2/13/2014 1:30:00 AM
Hi Robert, I,m peters cousin, what a beautiful poem this is, I could almost feel your pain wearing those shoes and the feel of the cold on your face, it seems you had a lonely trip to school everyday. It must have been enjoyable in the summertime though. Look forward to reading more of your work.
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Date: 1/28/2014 2:58:00 PM
A powerful, thought and poem Robert, , CONGRATULATIONS, for making the top, hottest, and the best NEW poets list on the Poetry Soup. . I'm happy for you. ~ LOVE ~ SKAT
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 1/29/2014 1:18:00 PM
Thank you for your comments. I did not even realise I was on there. I wish more of the people looking at my work would leave comments. I was saying to Peter Duggan that I might pull out but he said to stick with it. Thank you again for popping by regards Andy

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