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Eyes Closed

Drifting between unreality and death Ten seconds longer, now I need to catch my breath To make me shudder, to make me sigh You're getting so good So gentle but so persuasive And now I've even begun to cry How does it feel to know you have such control Such a tight grip, your hand over my soul You're deliberate but not demanding I'm disintegrating in your arms Paralyzed but still moving Listening to everything you're commanding As I'm drifting between unreality and death I'm caressed and ultimately possessed...

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Date: 4/30/2009 2:29:00 PM
good description, like it a lot.
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