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Eyes Break

walk away broken the token of a blasted show- i said no- eyes break away from the body, i can't breathe in & out of my mind i roam. don't come closer i see your mouth foam dripdrop i'm all alone on the tiptop of desolation hill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/5/2010 7:47:00 PM
I enjoyed the rhyming and alliteration. You tactfully and carefully construct your words.
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