Eyne

. From those eyne the sunshine beaming The sunshine beaming from those eyne Beaming from those eyne the sunshine From those beaming sunshine the eyne

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2011 12:46:00 PM

sounds like love..devilish me wants to say "beam me up scottie;)" Light & Love

Daver Austin

Date: 12/9/2010 7:40:00 AM

Aye, aye, Sir James. These orbs definitely are free of glaucoma or cataracts. Devlishly clever thou art. Love, Dave

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/8/2010 6:54:00 PM

very cool flow of imagination, twisting upon itself to perfection in the last stanza! cool indeed! jimbo

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/8/2010 11:46:00 AM

Awesome, James!!! Could this be a new form, you think? idk much about poetry forms, but this looks like it could be one! Check it out. Love, Audrey

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/6/2010 9:39:00 PM

This is so cute. Working in our own store with eyeglasses for 18 years I seen all kinds of eyes. Expressive are those eyes. God Bless Phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:38:00 PM

OOOH, this is one I really like, and say, I just saw a really old blog comment you made me on fritters. OH yes, the cod fritters sounds great. I bet it's like fish and chips!!!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/6/2010 2:55:00 PM

So much warmth and light in those eyes,so much passion.I wonder what color they are?they must be golden..sensual poem James.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2010 11:45:00 AM

What a creative new style, James. I love the way you created different images be reorganizing the words. Awesome, dear friend! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/6/2010 10:53:00 AM

Awesome if you can see the sunshine in someone's eyes James.. Stay away from those juices now will ya!! ;) love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/6/2010 8:08:00 AM

Good one..Nice to meet someone who has that much radiance about them..Sara