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Eye Sea Bye the See

Sea the wight-capped waives rolling inn the see; here the howling wynds, wile I’m standing hear, whale and forme hi waives. Theirs eh jumping wail- tale upp inn the ayre! This should make gneiss tail two tel wen eye get holm. Butt now theirs too blew wales inn wiaves- there water spouts just blue! Whether getting worse, kneed two sea weather it's my thyme too lieve since wynd now blows it’s grate, whiled sounds awl across the see, witch great allowed and shriek. Could bee, I’m knot aloud write hear two stay- dew knot want gnus too right, “Sum man fell inn the see and payed the some witch cost his life from storms angry whiled which.” Week legs mite make mi sync and fall; eh weak wood pass before they fined mi with eh would bored inn my grippe from roe boat beet and board bye waives and whild wynds that kame and flue buy. Eye no, its thyme too lieve, cum back wen aye cee com, and eye can stay eh wile two sea wails jump inn waives without the wynd’s whiled whales. April 7, 2015 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Only Homo’s Allowed Sponsor: Jerry T. Curtis Judged: 04/30/2015 (Homophones)

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Date: 5/4/2015 7:48:00 AM
congratulations Sandra, you got it right, no mistakes , well done.
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Date: 5/3/2015 9:33:00 AM
Add my congratulations to your worth winning poem... Archana
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Date: 5/3/2015 4:44:00 AM
A decidedly winning piece, Sandra. Congratulations! Loved your homophonic take. lol! Kim :)
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Date: 5/2/2015 8:20:00 PM
Most deservedly winning verse. Congrats, Sandra!
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:49:00 PM
Hi Sandra: Eye can sea y ewe one! grate poem!
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Date: 5/2/2015 6:35:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Sandra
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Date: 5/1/2015 11:39:00 PM
Congrats.... SKAT
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Date: 5/1/2015 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Sandra, a 7. Blessings and hugs eve
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Date: 5/1/2015 2:13:00 PM
Congrats for your second place win, Sandra, in this difficult contest! I'm amazed how many homophones you used in your amazing poem, too! I noticed that all three of us who placed used the subject of the sea and ocean in our poems :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/1/2015 2:55:00 PM
Yes, I noticed that too, Laura. Thank you for your nice comment and congrats. It was difficult, but I found it a fun challenge. Again, yours was awesome! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/1/2015 1:24:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats - Jerry set us a real challenge with this contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/1/2015 3:01:00 PM
I noticed we had all used the 'see theme two' :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/1/2015 2:56:00 PM
Jan, thank you for your congratulations! I loved working on this challenge! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/1/2015 1:17:00 PM
Good one as usual Sandra....
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/1/2015 3:48:00 PM
YEP! ICY BY THE C.....LOL
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/1/2015 2:57:00 PM
Thanks, Judy. I appreciate your visit and positive comment. Sandra
Date: 5/1/2015 7:27:00 AM
Great write Sandra! Congrats on your win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/1/2015 2:57:00 PM
Hi Tammy, thank you for stopping by with your encouraging comment and congratulations! Sandra
Date: 4/30/2015 7:23:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem, Sandra. BTW,in response to your email, contest is closed. Opened it briefly to judge some had forgot.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/1/2015 2:53:00 PM
Thank you, Thomas, for stopping by with your nice comment. Yes, I see your contest winner's list is back. Thanks again, Sandra
Date: 4/8/2015 9:33:00 AM
Okay!! The old English is hard to read..Thanks for the visit to my page..This should be a winner..Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2015 8:46:00 PM
Ha Ha! I feel sorry for Jerry who has to read all of these! Thanks for the nice comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/8/2015 8:28:00 AM
Lovely Sandra.. :)! Gpd bless you in the contest.. :)!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2015 8:48:00 PM
Thanks, Olive...it was fun to work on. I appreciate your visit and your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/7/2015 6:24:00 PM
wow, that was quite a lot of work making first and end words rhyme. You found a great hook!! So when and wen are homophones. I have a poem ready to post but i did not know there was a word "wen!"
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/7/2015 6:55:00 PM
Hi Andrea, try this website, it helps a lot! Thanks for stopping by. This is real fun one to do. Sandra http://www.homophone.com/
Date: 4/7/2015 5:09:00 PM
Very clever write Sandra - it takes me a couple of reads of these poems to get the words to register in my brain lol:-) hugs jan xx good luck in the contest:-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/7/2015 6:57:00 PM
Yes, Jan...they are difficult to read. Fee sorry for Jerry! I had fun doing it, though. Thanks for stopping by with your encouraging comment and best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

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