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Eye Knew It

Eye knew it The dirty fly has compound eyes It sees in all directions A swatter swats it anyway So much for eye protection Randomling Contest August 30, 2015

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Gail Debole
Date: 10/14/2015 7:13:00 PM
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Ha! Clever. So much for compound eyes. (All creatures have a right to be on this earth, but I am not a fan of flies.)
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/9/2015 10:21:00 AM
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No matter how much preparation we make but if we are unaware of others perception we will fail by being unable to tackle the issue.
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James Inman
Date: 9/16/2015 10:58:00 AM
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Great little poem Ralph
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/16/2015 12:31:00 AM
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Ralph, this is really cute. Another thing I learned about flies: if you don't have a swatter available and have to use your bare hand or something smaller, you need to aim BEHIND the fly. He takes off by first going in reverse!! It really works!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 9/13/2015 9:39:00 AM
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Hi Suzanne: Thank you for your comment. I enjoyed your randomlings especially "Earths School".
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/12/2015 2:17:00 PM
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This is fun, Ralph. Your musing are spot on in the best random way...lol SuZ
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/9/2015 6:27:00 PM
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:) Oh...I'm giggling. This is really amazing! Congrats on your win. I enjoyed this. Thanks for your visit to me....
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John Lawless
Date: 9/9/2015 3:55:00 PM
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Ralph....that is pissa.....my laugh for the day....
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 9/9/2015 7:31:00 PM
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Thank you, John and I'm glad i made you laugh.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/9/2015 11:43:00 AM
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Congrats Raph on your win! Compound eyes can't escape a swatter! Balveen
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/9/2015 10:03:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 9/9/2015 11:34:00 AM
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Hi Eve: Thank you for the congrats. I really enjoyed your who is my neighbor. Kinda like a poem on the run. I enjoy those types. good WRITE!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/9/2015 1:43:00 AM
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Very wonderful write Ralph n a superb win! Big congrats! Thnx for visit to my page!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 9/9/2015 11:36:00 AM
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Hi Dr. Upma: Thanks for the comment. I enjoyed writing it.

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