Eye Candy

I sit in the mall for hours at a time The young fillies today surely don't mind Showing their parts I considerate it art Sure enjoy gawking and glad I ain't blind © Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

Date: 11/30/2015 12:19:00 PM

Uh! Jack! It's Forever in your mind... We'll know that you're gone when you don't write that way so refined... Or else you will have lost your mind... But doubt either will happen as the wind and the behinds... as art will always need to be signed...

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/30/2015 12:27:00 PM

80 years old... feel like 40!!!!!!! NEVER TOO OLD TO ENJOY THE IMAGES OF THE YOUNG FILLES!!!! xoxox

Tim Smith

Date: 11/27/2015 1:49:00 PM

Behind the glass mirror he does sit...watching girls as they fit...into new clothes...that they chose....a heinous crime he commits

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/27/2015 4:22:00 PM

You're on to me, dear Mr. Timothy... please don't snitch on me, I'll pay big bucks!!! LOL

Jill Spagnola

Date: 11/27/2015 7:57:00 AM

Jack, if your gonna gawk at least wear shades! Check out the limerick you inspired in me, my first so go easy...:), jill

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/27/2015 8:12:00 AM

Jack and Jill went up the hill... and then, and then? They started fooling around in the grass! This is the X-rated version! I will definitely check out your first limerick, dear Jill! Love, Jack xox