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I see him standing in the rain, this debonair and handsome Dane. He says, "I don't know if I dare to ask a lovely rose, so rare to join me for a bite to eat." I answer shyly, "That would be neat." Then happily we watch a toad, playing leap-frog on the road. We go to lunch and I take note, that on his handsomeness I dote. I giggle a bit I don't deny, when he drops gravy on his tie. 5/17/12 For Catie's Word game contest

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Date: 6/7/2012 9:52:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your win in Catie's contest.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 6/6/2012 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Word Games" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2012 1:52:00 AM
Joyce congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/17/2012 7:04:00 PM
nicely rhymed.
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Date: 5/17/2012 5:03:00 PM
Love your entry for this contest, Joyce, Isn't Catie's contest crafty? Haven't given it a go yet. Yours is sure to place high! Cyndi -- -PS, I placed a question on your blog about your contest. When you can, can you please let me know? Thank you.
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Date: 5/17/2012 5:03:00 PM
good luck in contest
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Date: 5/17/2012 4:44:00 PM
Awesome write for this contest....best of luck! (Smiles)
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Date: 5/17/2012 4:44:00 PM
Awesome write for this contest....best of luck! (Smiles)
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Date: 5/17/2012 4:28:00 PM
Joyce an excellent funny write, good luck..David
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Date: 5/17/2012 4:05:00 PM
oh Joyce, this is adorable!!! I love it!!! It made me SMILE!! thank you so much for sharing and best wishes in the contest!! big hugs, love ya deb
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