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Extra Long Tentacles

There once was a gal named Sue So ugly she belonged in a zoo Had extra long tentacles That apparently were edible When added to your homemade stew © Jack Ellison 20015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/8/2015 4:43:00 PM

I read this one as well, and forgot to comment on it. I wouldn't know what to do with tentacles. I suppose swimming would be interesting. Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2015 5:27:00 PM

Swimming would be amazing... probably illegal to swim in the Olympics though! LOL Love, Jackson xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/31/2015 10:04:00 AM

Sounds like she'd fit right into Mayhem Falls. PS. She'd be safe here... Grandpa Troll is THAT great a cook... without using her tenacles! And we could sure use her in a Dragon tickling contest at the Fall Dragon fair!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2015 4:11:00 PM

She's all yours!!! LOL xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2015 9:35:00 AM

ha ha ha love it - do drop by and see me sometime :-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2015 4:16:00 PM

Oh get well soon Jack visits to me can wait - get yourself fit:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2015 4:14:00 PM

Sorry... crazy weekend and not feeling well on top of that! My apologies... be back on track soon! Love, Jack xxx