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Expulsion

the end of the bridge my heart aches tears roll down cheeks goodbye my country

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Ana Espinola Collins
Date: 2/1/2015 8:28:00 PM
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A poetic sad goodbye....nicely done Rajat...7 :)Ana
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/26/2015 3:50:00 PM
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A very sad Haiku, but a well described experience.
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/26/2015 2:34:00 PM
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Having read the comments below, this poem makes a lot of sense; very touching! #7 expulsion, suffering and survival are very strong words, Rajat! // paul
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/26/2015 12:54:00 PM
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Oh, how very sad to be exiled from one's homeland! You reflected all those heart- tugging sentiments in this awesome Haiku! This one gets a solid "7" all the way! Bravo! Pandita.
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/26/2015 1:05:00 PM
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Pandita my parents struggled so that we can see better future.We were virtually expelled from our own land and set foot in a new land." the end of the bridge" conveys the feel of a beginning of despair. Love>rajat
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Bl Devnath
Date: 1/26/2015 11:03:00 AM
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i feel here country of heart, my lovely friend. Beautifully done. Happy Republic Day. Loved always,bl
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/26/2015 11:14:00 AM
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Happy R-Day BL.Regards>rajat
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 1/26/2015 9:51:00 AM
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happy foundation day, rajat... remarkable, reflective write.. hugggs
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/26/2015 11:05:00 AM
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Happy Republic Day Mehtasaab.Regards>rajat
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 1/26/2015 7:12:00 AM
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Very sad write, happy R-Day, I hope you are right, Rajatji
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