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'exposed'

mysterious spheres uncover my cradled thoughts freedom on offer 061220111328

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2011 8:27:00 PM

Wilma, I'm reviewing this older contest that was judged and saw you got HM. Congratulations, and I hope your day is wonderful.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/10/2011 2:13:00 PM

Somehow I missed this gem. You always write with ink that is deep and powerful. I love this and have missed my cape town girl :(. Hope your well and yes all is good here luv. Xoxo. Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2011 12:12:00 AM

WEll, gosh, I missed this recent one. That is a very cool line, Wilma. "uncover my cradled thoughts!" How is your December over there in south africa?

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/8/2011 3:20:00 PM

Congrats on your HM, Wilma! Kim

James Peranteau

Date: 12/7/2011 7:30:00 PM

Def. a foible here dear poet, a true 'Senryu' by form. I've enjoyed this; "Exposed"...Have a wonderful week Wilma....much love, james

David Williams

Date: 12/7/2011 12:03:00 PM

Wilma congrats on your win ..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2011 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Triplet" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 12/7/2011 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your win in Brian's contest.Liked it first time around.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2011 12:36:00 AM

Wilma, wow... this is very exposed.. i like your cradle thoughts line... that is my kind of thinking... lol... I'm gonna say this is the best Senryu ever... super love it... always,..p.d.

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 12/6/2011 4:46:00 PM

My Sweet Wilma. It's good to read your poems again. They bring comfort to my heart. Ps I expected this one to be really naughty and thta is why I chose it first. you know me :-)

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/6/2011 4:45:00 PM

Oh such a lot of meaning here, Wilma, enjoyed this this. harry

David Williams

Date: 12/6/2011 8:42:00 AM

Wilma nice senryu, we all need some mystery in our lives..David

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2011 5:32:00 AM

A thought provoking write Wilma.Nicely expressed feelings in Senryu form.