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'exploring the Shadows'

as he enters he switches off the lights particles of light peep through the blinds the air filled with tension we haven't been here in this space in what seem like ages the smell of flowers so overpowering I shield myself from his gaze his hands move over my face he gently kiss my nose, slowly moving to my forehead the ease in which he does it calms me serene in preparation as he expertly yet gently awake all those senses which lay dormant the moment is now it is just the two of us while we explore - flirt with the senses the shadow moves over our naked bodies ©011220111440

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/24/2013 1:03:00 PM
† Yes Stirring Our Senses Beyound A Doubt! Congratulations, Upon Your Magnificent In Splendour's Feature And Yes Again, Wow ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John ... Ps., I Am Going To Favour This Jeweled Page In, Beauty's Poetic Art. *
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Date: 11/24/2013 11:38:00 AM
Hello Wilma, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 11/22/2013 11:53:00 AM
Wilma, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:46:00 AM
Beautiful and subtly sensual. Well crafted. Congrats on being featured on the soup home page.
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Date: 11/17/2013 9:08:00 PM
This is wonderful Wilma. A truly special winning poem to be featured.
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Date: 8/19/2012 10:15:00 PM
Wilma, this is beautiful! Shadows is were the truth lies....Lol Great piece
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Date: 1/22/2012 12:03:00 AM
Wilma, Congratulations, in Matt's wonderful contest. Have a great one, always & forever PD
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Date: 1/20/2012 7:32:00 PM
How beautiful, sets wonderful mood with great imagery. Congratulations on your win, Greg
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Date: 1/20/2012 12:46:00 PM
Wonderful explorations of shadows here.A fav!!Congrats Wilma on your win.Where are u?
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Date: 1/20/2012 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Matt's "Anything" contest Wilma. Love,Carol
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:52:00 PM
WAY to GO on this very late contest. I can't even remember what I entered into it anymore but of course, he didn't like it. hahaha. Congratulations, Wilma. It is awesome.
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:17:00 PM
Congrats on 6th place in my "Anything" contest! Woohoo!
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Date: 12/14/2011 7:34:00 AM
ohhh so dreamy I just loved it! [one suggestion [which lay dormant/ instead of that lay dormant] Happy Holy days and thanks so much for dropping by! Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2011 12:55:00 AM
wow! I kid you not,,, i don't act like a nerd... but, you have a very good opening on your poem.. (((particles of light peep through the blinds the air filled with tension ))) <--- i can actually almost see all the particles that stay when peeking through any light.. a clever poem.. except for I see a big mass of matter moving at the end...lol.. get it... super enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 12/6/2011 4:59:00 PM
Wow, I like it. Mouth watering and it's got me thinking. Naughty me :-)
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Date: 12/4/2011 5:04:00 PM
VERY sensuous writing,Wilma with that shadow involved!! Nothing like mounting passion!!
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:24:00 PM
Wow! Passion combined with very creative description. What a great poem, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/4/2011 11:42:00 AM
Wow Wilma you just warmed up about half of new York !! Images should be read after sun goes down lol. Love your mind in this warm loving piece. Love and long hugs for you Bella. Michael
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Date: 12/2/2011 11:14:00 PM
Ooh~ you sure made shadows un-scary (ok is that a word??) here, Missy-- I almost feel shy, makes me feel like I am sneaking in on an intimate moment here-- and I can hear you saying, "Yeahhh right, missy!" ;) mwahugs
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:12:00 PM
wow! Wilam,, this one really needs a double wow! well... you get the picture on my "cat got my tongue"" enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 12/1/2011 4:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..I am glad that I selected it...Sara
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Date: 12/1/2011 7:41:00 AM
Beautiful poem Willma, that i'm exploring here. harry
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Date: 12/1/2011 7:14:00 AM
* "'While We Explore * Flirt With The Senses * The Shadow Moves Over Our Naked Bodies' * I Love Those Passionate & Tingling Lines * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Wilma * Caught In A Oourts Moment * The Heat of Emotions Emitting * Senses Coming Life * Will Destiny Intervene * Has It Already Had Its Say * Love & Eternity * Very Beautiful In Captivations Light * My Luv, Forever & Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:11:00 AM
whew! Must be warm in here or I just got another one of those hot flashes! Knew I shouldn't have had that hot sauce for breakfast! : )
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