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Explaining Family Truth To Orphans

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Innocently shocked, they surveyed their new abode midst warm welcome of strangers introducing themselves sweetly assuring, “We are your family --- starting today.” Such captivating look would soon grip my heart when they candidly confronted me with this question I found it hard to explain to kids, aged six and four… “Why are you now our Mommy? With truth I prayed to impart, my soul reached out to them cognizant of their status as siblings among our orphanage residents... I let them feel my care, and that of my fellow staff along our reverberating: “We love you; yet God loves you so much to bring you here.” Their understanding vis-à-vis home verities has been enlightened through bits of life realities along Scriptural precepts: their exposure to joyous relationships as well as delight for togetherness bonded with the Lord’s compassion beyond blood and gene’s kinship… Such enabled them not to be ignorant about family* essence.
*Psalm 68:6 God setteth the solitary in families… October 2, 2020 3rd place, "The Unexplained" Contest Sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire; judged on 10/2/2020.

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Date: 10/2/2020 4:30:00 PM
You are without doubt a significant blessing to every child's life you have been involved with. The psalm is a good sentiment, but of course is not actuality in a lot of instances.... Without those such as yourself, the situation of unowned children would be far worse. I value your care depicted here, you certainly are enacting God's will. Congratulations on your Win, Beata.
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Date: 10/2/2020 11:14:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Beata :) - Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 11:04:00 AM
It's not really a mystery that the children had parents, but I did enjoy the poem very much. And I'm glad the orphans have someone as compassionate as you to care for them. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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