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Expiration Fate

Expiration Fate Exhale breath in retreat… life… denying stasis of respirations yin and yang - fulfilled.. John G. Lawless 6/4/2015 submitted to – Cinquain – Poetry Contest sponsor – Sara Kendrick

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/15/2015 3:13:00 PM

Cngrats on your win in my contest..I appreciate you entering ..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2015 12:03:00 AM

A very thoughtful one you wrote, John.

John Lawless
Date: 6/12/2015 5:57:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by Andrea, always appreciated

Eve Roper

Date: 6/11/2015 4:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,John hugs dear friend Eve

John Lawless
Date: 6/12/2015 5:56:00 AM

thanks for stopping by to read and comment Eve

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2015 3:56:00 PM

Hi John, Congratulations........ SKAT

John Lawless
Date: 6/12/2015 5:56:00 AM

Thanks SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2015 2:12:00 PM

John, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA"

John Lawless
Date: 6/12/2015 5:54:00 AM

Thank you Linda

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2015 10:20:00 AM

congrats on your HM John - i enjoyed your write:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 6/12/2015 5:53:00 AM

Good morning Jan and thank you for your continuing support.

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/10/2015 10:24:00 PM

Congrats on your Honorable Mention, John! Love, Kim

John Lawless
Date: 6/12/2015 5:48:00 AM

...but Caesar was an honorable man....OH, wait...that didn't turn out so good.... Thanks for stopping by Kim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/6/2015 5:23:00 AM

what a balanced chi.. i like the feel of higher consciousness within your piece, john... huggs

John Lawless
Date: 6/12/2015 5:39:00 AM

Nette, I think I reside somewhere between the Yin and Yang and "the sound of one hand clapping". Thanks for reading and commenting.

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/5/2015 11:09:00 AM

Excellent cinquain, John! Love the creative "yin and yang" part! :)

John Lawless
Date: 6/12/2015 5:38:00 AM

Thanks Laura, appreciate your support and comments.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/4/2015 10:30:00 PM

Wonderful cinquain John, sure will do well in contest! BEST WISHES!

John Lawless
Date: 6/5/2015 7:27:00 AM

Thank you, the Cinquain always causes me distress when writing.

Joseph May

Date: 6/4/2015 6:56:00 PM

Very good Cinquain John...one that must be inhaled slowly...

John Lawless
Date: 6/5/2015 7:27:00 AM

Love the comment Joseph....

Constance La France

Date: 6/4/2015 6:28:00 PM

John, love your cinqain, a big fat 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, dark now the thing is that I wrote 2 cinqain dark which I love and sweet which I like, I looked at the sponsors poems and it seems she does not write dark so I entered sweet, hummm. ..now I am not sure

John Lawless
Date: 6/5/2015 7:26:00 AM

Thanks for the high marks. As for contest submissions, I just write what I write in response to the prompt of the contest without concern for results yet keep it within the scope of the theme.....the rest is up to the sponsors judgement.