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Experiencing the Rain

Experiencing the Rain By Elton Camp Dark clouds approach from the west To the coming summer storm attest The grass has become brown and dry Life-giving moisture rain will supply When rain is near, I usually can tell it Partly because I’m able to smell it “It’s ozone,” weather experts all say “Lightning is why it smells that way” For such explanation I don’t care The storm is saying, “I am there” Louder is the thunder as it draws near Vivid streaks of lightning then appear “Come inside,” my wife calls out Her advice is wise, I have no doubt The wind picks up and the leaves shake A safe refuge I was then forced to take With sudden fury, the rain does begin It stops a second, then starts again On the roof it commences to drum Through the downspouts it’ll come Now it falls in the thickest sheets Against the window panes it beats Raindrops hit puddles that are advancing Old folks may say that fairies are dancing All outside has become fresh and new Just as a summer rain will always do What, from such a rain, do you get? Some feel it, but others just get wet

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Date: 3/16/2013 11:43:00 AM
Sound like what we call a toad strangler. Loved this Elton ....Donna
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Date: 3/16/2013 11:55:00 AM
An interesting expression that I've never heard before. It reminds me of the country belief that young chickens will rush out into a downpour, turn their heads up, and drown as rain enters their nostrils and lungs. I don't know if this is true or not, but heard it a lot when I was a small child. Elton
Date: 3/16/2013 8:36:00 AM
- .... it smells so good after the rain, especially in the summer. - A poem which I liked very much, Elton. - Thank you! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/16/2013 9:35:00 AM
Thanks and have a good one also. Beautiful here with highs in the 70s. Rain coming in Monday. Elton
Date: 3/16/2013 8:06:00 AM
very vividly described - i enjoyed!
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Date: 3/16/2013 9:39:00 AM
We love to sit on our screened back porch during a rain. Even the occasional hailstorm is enjoyable if not large enough to do any harm. Several years ago we had one with stones larger than my closed fist--houses and cars were damaged all over town! Elton

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