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Expended Rage.

Furious furnace disperses zinc eclipse with angry thrusts of gold.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/3/2010 8:15:00 PM

furry of the beauty of night and day mixed together, enjoyed the haiuk, and i would be delighted to take your poem request, give me 2 days, than look out for it,..p.d.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/22/2010 12:05:00 PM

Looks like congratulations is in order! Congrats on your win. Sorry I haven't followed contests for a while, but this Haiku is outstanding. Well deserved win. And thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.

James Fraser

Date: 4/21/2010 12:35:00 PM

Superb take on the picture Gerard, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2010 1:32:00 PM

Very different this one! Congratulations, Gerard!

Date: 4/16/2010 1:10:00 PM

I like the active nature of this poem. Nice use of imagery to share your view. Congratulations on your sisth place finish in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/16/2010 8:23:00 AM

very nice congrats on your win faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2010 5:12:00 AM

Congrats Gerard on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. what an exciting visual of the photo and a wonderful win my friend for u to so enjoy.. as u take your victory lap to the winners circle...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Mitch White

Date: 4/16/2010 3:10:00 AM

Powerful description indeed- Congrats Gerard

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/16/2010 1:39:00 AM

Gerard, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2010 10:30:00 PM

this is good too. But it's not for that current picture contest is it? I just read the poem above this and that one seems to be for the contest. enjoyed reading! andrea

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/9/2010 7:02:00 PM

Oh this is a good one!! Powerful haiku!! Good job, and a different twist on the contest! ~ Love, Carrie

Skat A

Date: 4/9/2010 4:44:00 PM

LIKED THIS HAIKU... I FEEL THE RAGE LOL

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2010 4:33:00 PM

Interesting write ....If for the contest, good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara