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The day is fresh Long before the sun yawns into the morning The sound of bells clanging Ropes whipping the mast into shape Creaking of the old boats A feint smell of lobster Rises to meet me as the zip Rasps towards my chin Along the comfortable material Of the gilet Can the ocean be trusted? No more than the weather No more than a wild animal However tamed they appear Domesticated the ocean will never be I climb down the wooden ladder Into the trusty boat I pause in the moment Feet sensing the security of My familiar friend Stormy seas we have seen Yet she welcomes me back I sense her sigh with relief A voiceless, palpable release As I hoist the sail Pushing away from the harbour wall We both know This is not the place for us A gull invites us to follow So we nod along

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Date: 9/24/2023 7:04:00 AM
Sam, absolutely outstanding, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your poem, the image, the quote and that audio, wow, now that is how an audio is done, well done.
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Date: 9/24/2023 8:04:00 AM
Some wonderful poems in your contest with such an array of taLented poets. Thank you for placing me and for such lovely lovely comments x look forward to the next one!
Date: 9/18/2023 6:32:00 AM
Oh sam! You wrote for the prompt! I am so pleased to see you were inspired. I really loved this poem, the imagery and how it flows, so many lines stood out for me especially “ can the ocean be trusted” good question. Intriguing and heartfelt. Thank you for writing. Congratulations
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Date: 9/18/2023 7:13:00 AM
You are a true inspiration and I am lifted by your always kind words. I did enjoy this one and the ocean is a theme often revisited :))
Date: 9/13/2023 9:54:00 AM
beautifully described, sam! i could picture it perfectly (even if i don't know what a gilet is)...
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Date: 9/13/2023 9:59:00 AM
ilene, you are wonderful to say, thankyou. I do recommend a gilet for Winter :)

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