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How I would like to devour you whole. When I see you dancing around that pole, you excite me to the extremes. You're the kind of woman I see in my dreams. Your twists and turns are so erotic. This is not the usual, but the exotic. You dance like Salome, and are such a delight. Perhaps I shall come back tomorrow night. inspired by another member's poem

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Date: 3/4/2014 5:45:00 PM
This is great Robert
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Date: 3/4/2014 5:26:00 PM
I've just watched the end of a programme on pole dancers and then came across your poem. Very well observed poem. Jan x
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Date: 3/4/2014 1:40:00 PM
You sure have a good choice of words and...women. I'm certain that you'll go back pretty soon :)
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Date: 3/4/2014 1:03:00 PM
Yip... you summed up how woman have complete control and allure over men. Enjoyed this. Thank you Xx~Xx
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Date: 3/4/2014 12:32:00 PM
This is SIZZZZZZZZZZLING!!!!! WOW! Great write....Hope you get to ASSESS her Assets...;-) Thanks for pointing that out.....I owe you !!!! Big time!!!
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