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Existence In Poetry Soup

Besides competitions; Besides being "liked" or my poems getting comments, I want to become a better poet each day by reading other people's poems, and correcting mistakes my fellow poets see in my work. Poetry Soup is also a virtual family- it is another home for me; my mind is at rest in this site....

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Julia Ward

Date: 1/20/2016 4:37:00 AM

A good last line, Teddy. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/22/2015 7:01:00 AM

Currently I feel like it is a family war zone Teddy and I hate to see the fighting - it used to be my haven .... :-( hugs Jan xx All I want to do is write and have fun

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 12/22/2015 7:57:00 AM

Lol. I forgot that line too...I love writing for fun too! ;-) Don't worry. Sometimes for things to be right, there has to be some wrangles here and there, as a test of our deep convictions on being human. Merry X-Mas in advance! ;-)