Existence

Existence World is a drama stage, which has a dwimmer screen, that can trap you with a net of desires. Several stories, diverse roles, pretending folks, everything is fake! So why do you shed tears for these ungrateful peeps? Love is a phantasm, which starts with a thirst and ends up in a despair! Life turns out a desert, if you are not alert. Do you want to put an effort, or slog fruitlessly and revert?

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Smita Kulkarni

Date: 7/21/2023 1:37:00 PM

Great poem Saivi!

Deb M

Date: 6/8/2023 5:53:00 AM

Congratulations Saivi on your POTD!! Debx

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/8/2023 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Mr.Deb.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/6/2023 8:10:00 PM

There's life beyond a computer screen. Balance is very important. One thing to remember: Always be true to who you are. Congratulations Saivi, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/7/2023 10:52:00 AM

Thank you Ms.Brandy.

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/6/2023 2:52:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD Saivi Kurian! A prudent and senseful poem. I read somewhere that if your heart is filled with love…you will feel love from the fakes and you will be happy (Unless it's a forced marriage)--anything takes energy. I Am Anaya

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/7/2023 10:55:00 AM

Thank you Ms.Anaya for your feedback.

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/6/2023 2:05:00 PM

Intellectual verses that stimulate the ole brain my friend. Congratulate on POTD! A fav...

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/7/2023 10:55:00 AM

Thank you Mr.Robert for your feedback.

Ken Rone

Date: 6/6/2023 1:57:00 PM

Excellent associations Saivi and the thread is a flowing continuum. Your emotive warnings are clear and relatable. Thank you and congrattulations on a great POTD. Best - Ken

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/7/2023 10:59:00 AM

I sincerely appreciate your time for reading my poem and understanding. Thank you very much Mr.Ken.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/6/2023 1:48:00 PM

Congratulations on this deep provoking piece and your well deserved potd honor Enjoyed

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/7/2023 11:00:00 AM

My sincere gratitude Ms. Nancy. Thank you so much.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/6/2023 1:36:00 PM

Dear Saivi, your poem is definitely an intriguing and thought-provoking one. Made me ponder. Congratulations on honour of POTD. Warm wishes.

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/7/2023 11:03:00 AM

Please accept my deepest thanks Ms.Malabika Ray. I appreciate your time.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/6/2023 11:17:00 AM

Congratulations, Saivi on your POTD honor. Your poem is both emotionally charged and intellectually stimulating. It is a poignant reminder to always strive for authenticity and reject the superficiality of illusions and facades. Welcome to the Soup community Saivi.

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/6/2023 11:28:00 AM

Thank you Mr.Sotto for understanding my poem.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/6/2023 9:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A powerful write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/6/2023 9:51:00 AM

Thank you Ms.Paula for your feedback.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/6/2023 8:49:00 AM

Seems you are searching, Saivi, searching for the truth. Silence whispers deep secrets, if we be therein present :) warmest congratulations on POTD

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/6/2023 9:51:00 AM

Thank you unseeking seeker!

Bill Baker

Date: 6/6/2023 7:02:00 AM

Intriguing poem, Saivi. Makes a person think. I liked it. Congratulations on your POTD honor. Welcome to Poetry Soup. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/6/2023 9:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Mr.Bill.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 6/6/2023 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations Saivi ! Intense emotion and thought provoking for sure . Yes to putting in an effort and staying away from the illusions and fakes ! Welcome to Soup ! Susan :)

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/6/2023 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Ms.Susan.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/6/2023 6:15:00 AM

Chaos reigns Saivi! us humans try bring a semblance of order to our lives and control it, which on the grand scale or things is probably a losing battle, like your final rhyme says, either put in the effort or revert, congratulations on your honest evaluation of life, receiving POTD honours, cheers David

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/6/2023 9:48:00 AM

Thank you Mr.David for understanding the poem so well.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/6/2023 6:09:00 AM

We need to live life not the life we see on the screen. Congratulations on POTD, Saivi! Loved the word “dwimmer”

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/6/2023 9:46:00 AM

Thank you so much for your feedback.

Stephan McBride

Date: 6/6/2023 5:49:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, May you encourage and be a light to teach one to be alert and escape when it's their time to be in the cast net , that they might be separated unto a keeper , for many will be tossed out which you have seen by your poem, look forward to many more thought provoking poems from you, Big Welcome to Poetry Soup, starting off with poem of the day

Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/6/2023 9:44:00 AM

Thank you Mr.Stephan for understanding the poem so well.