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Existence - Be Happy

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painting life's portrait smiling faces on earth barefoot happy kid. read mom's story before eyes close and journey lives forever young. love so tenderly heart filled with our memories happiness reveals.

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Lynn Marie

Date: 2/22/2017 12:28:00 AM

..This is just magical aiyah:-) Beautiful writing, lovely to read :-) blessings, lynn

Len Gasun

Date: 1/8/2016 8:11:00 PM

I'm so glad to read one of your precious gems this morning my very dear friend, Aiyah! I'm so glad to see you on my poem today. Thank you so much. Hope and pray, you're always doing well. Take care always! love lots, Leonora

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/4/2015 3:38:00 PM

ohh, your winsome, happy write delights, aiyah!.. well done!.. huggs

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/31/2015 12:17:00 PM

The imagery and shear beauty of your words are impressively seasoned by your talent and fill the heart with their magic. Emile.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/31/2015 10:30:00 AM

Congrats for your wonderful, winning poem Aiyah! ^_^

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/31/2015 8:52:00 AM

These are indeed happy thoughts, congratulations.

James Inman

Date: 7/31/2015 8:31:00 AM

Lovely bittersweet write. Fills me with memories.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/31/2015 7:41:00 AM

You happy fills me with happiness.. :)

Skat A

Date: 7/31/2015 1:22:00 AM

lovely win. SKAT

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/31/2015 12:05:00 AM

Lovely work, Aiyah, well done, Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 11:25:00 PM

Congrats on ur brilliant winning poem Aiyah! Great uplifting work!

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/28/2015 8:07:00 PM

Deeelightful string! You do paint beautiful life images, Aiyah. Yeah! ...galing-galing! hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2015 3:43:00 AM

- This is a pleasure to read, my friend Aiyah ..... so encouraging and playful .... beautiful - (7!!!) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/27/2015 9:34:00 PM

admiration from this beholder much respect from this man due encouragement to keep it going I am indeed your newest fan...;)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/27/2015 10:27:00 AM

Aiyah, galing naman!!! Love all but my fave last one!~Olive Eloisa :D!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/26/2015 11:52:00 PM

This piece is so intriguing, as so much to read this..........A.M.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/26/2015 1:37:00 PM

My comment was an observation not a criticism. Some endings are sad. Personally I think version one is best because that was what you felt when writing. Don't let a comment colour your art. Hugs Rick

Aiyah Torres
Date: 7/27/2015 8:39:00 PM