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Excitement

I want some excitement in my life, Other than just day dreaming all my life. Thinking about the past days, Where trust was the biggest maze. Now all I can think about is my past fallacy, When I thought friendship was easy . When I thought life would be simple, When I thought solution could easily be kindled. Though not everyone can have a life of Tom Sawyer and Nancy Drew, So stay strong and learn something new. Follow your dreams too, And excitement will come running to you!

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Date: 5/21/2022 11:24:00 AM
Making plans for the future and having the fortune to see them come true, will definitely fill you with positive exciting vibes, Komal. ~ Regards & Blessings // paul
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/22/2022 1:06:00 AM
Yes Paul...Just waiting for that moment! Really glad seeing you here again! Thank you for your comment! Have a great Day!!:)
Date: 5/17/2022 1:21:00 AM
Love your enlightening poem, Komal.
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/17/2022 5:07:00 AM
Thank you for your kind reply Harry...Joy and blessings!:)
Date: 5/15/2022 8:17:00 PM
'Learn something new!' Keep moving forward, Komal, and keep smiling! Joy and Light! ~ Gershon
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/16/2022 1:15:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit! Have a great day! Joy and light to you too:)
Date: 5/15/2022 2:24:00 AM
Yes, Komal (LOTUS, in India?) Its a beautiful name, and beautiful, honest poem. Do NOT chase excitement, chase the Ways of LIGHT. Then LOVE, and Peace/shanthi (or Shalom as Jesus taught it) will be yours too. THats what I learned from the Bible, but was a Hindu til 1990.
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/15/2022 2:32:00 AM
Komal means soft and delicate ,and Kamal means Lotus :), thank you so much for your kind reply! Yes, I do agree with you! Glad you liked it!
Date: 5/14/2022 12:17:00 PM
Lovely piece on excitement Komal, with great imagery and insightfulness. Hope all is well with you, take care always, Gordon
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/14/2022 10:42:00 PM
Thank you for commenting! Glad you liked it! Yes, have a great day :)

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