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Exact Sounds But Different Ii

Higher power Hire power Lost jobs Job lost Feet stink Stinking feats Their strength Strong there Here dogs Dogs hear High wave Wave Hi!

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Date: 1/30/2011 12:06:00 PM
such a clever, winsome wrote, doris... i'm sooo liking all these... hmm, how about banana split/ split banana.. lol.. having fun here with you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/30/2011 7:55:00 AM
Well written, Doris! Enjoyed reall the read as well as part I of your poem!....All the best!...Love, Gert
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Date: 1/29/2011 10:58:00 AM
poetic renovation done here, how i wish it has a form so i can learn from your form. my poem that got you thinking is about the things we feel we can not do without but are actually deceptive....it causes hindrance and makes us stagnant. thanks for your very best concern. love, lightning ink.
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Date: 1/29/2011 9:18:00 AM
enjoyed this inventive write Doris,
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Date: 1/29/2011 6:19:00 AM
Very nice thought provoking write my derar Poet friend...luv Michael
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Date: 1/29/2011 4:35:00 AM
Good one..I like the stinking feats...That is also an oxymoron...Ha!Mom
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Date: 1/29/2011 4:05:00 AM
this is a mart write. i like it
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Date: 1/28/2011 8:23:00 PM
Very clever and nice pace!
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Date: 1/28/2011 7:01:00 PM
Wonderful....So Cute!!! I love it Doris!!! Christine
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