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Evolution Prevails

Evolution Prevails Time sculpting and altering shapes foresee intangible celestial disorder Visualizing imperfections scrambled and mangled influenced by gravity The impetus to thrive derailed by power causing an impending disaster Exacting unbearable efforts urging mortals to abate unyielding tenacity Sensing doom dwellers navigate toward Eden evading a flood of sorrow Utopia blinding obstinate beliefs abandoning truth for rituals redundant Evolution prevails igniting invisible currents in space to incessantly flow In perpetuity human existence is inarguably infinitesimal and irrelevant Penned: 09/2016 Aboard cruise liner: Vision Of The Seas Cruising in Europe

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Date: 6/20/2022 8:38:00 AM
deftly executed...and raises the question for me is not intelligence in itself the end...but love shines and the morrow as you hint may yet come to fruition...the universe is silent, because they are no more or have learned silence...great poems run thru many neuropathways...as you have accomplished
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 7/14/2022 6:29:00 AM
Your comment is very much appreciated Timothy!...ab
Date: 5/5/2022 10:07:00 AM
It's remarkable how you can convey such a profound reality in such a little amount of lines. The last line has a strong emotional resonance for me. Anselmo, you did an excellent job.
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 5/5/2022 11:17:00 AM
The last line isn't derogatory or belittling humanity, I just believe that being human is but one segment of our spirit's journey toward timelessness, taking countless forms in the process...ab
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 5/5/2022 10:35:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad, your comment means a lot to me!...ab

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