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Evolution of a Life Shared

love born ‘neath star sequins a hand extended and life’s slow dance begins confidential whispers exchanged vows professed on a sun-kissed beach eternity held in promises leaping dolphins revel in joy and they return when azure skies beckon the first-born’s toes to touch the ocean when the family erects sandcastles while waves lap the shore when the birds have left the nest as autumn fog covers the sea when aging lovers see sunset casting a pink aura on lazy clouds when the final glimmer of light surrenders to celestial curtains until the surviving spouse emits a sigh in the solitude of darkness *Entry for Nik Kulik's “Darn, I Wish I Wrote Whis” Contest

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Date: 6/5/2012 11:25:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 11:36:00 AM
Very good imagery here Carolyn!Congrats on your win in Nikko's contest.
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Date: 6/3/2012 2:22:00 AM
Carolyn congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/2/2012 10:48:00 AM
Hi Carolyn! How are you? Thank you so much for entering this very heartfelt and nostalgic piece in my contest-- I remember reading this from before and I always get moved when I read it-- that last line especially gets to me... Super congrats on your win :D
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Date: 8/8/2011 11:13:00 AM
I'll see you in that morning I rise my death adorning, that blessed day I'm done with mourning:) Lovely verse Carolyn.
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Date: 8/6/2011 2:07:00 AM
Many congratulations Carolyn on making it to first round of winners in Poetrysoup International Poetry contest. Winning wishes for the final round. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:38:00 PM
Oh my romantic and maudlin at the same time!! A fine write a winner moving foward! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/2/2011 11:22:00 AM
just beautiful, congrats on this entry making the first round in the PS contest
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Date: 7/11/2011 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Brian Strand's "Poeta" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2011 12:56:00 PM
I am surprised this was not among the 1's. I am still trying to figure out what Brian wants at time.s I like this one a lot and know there is lots of emotion and truth in it. Love, joyce
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Date: 3/6/2011 8:54:00 AM
I lived many a year on a beach of the Ocean Atlantic. I miss that place! Your poem took me there for a moment! Only I long to return, so I will have to read again, and again... Thank YOU! ~JS Lambert
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Date: 2/21/2011 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Rick's contest "The Pink Evening Sky". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/12/2011 11:15:00 PM
Way to rock the free verse. In fairness though the sky in my neighborhood could not possibly inspire a poem of such vivid beauty. Smog and pigeons just don't cut it lol. congrats on the victory Joe
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:48:00 AM
Hi Carolyn - I'm trying to catch up on all the poems I've missed. My college classes take up so much of my time. Loved this! Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Rick's contest. Best wishes, Kory (KC)
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:10:00 PM
Don't know how I missed this beauty Carolyn, "Congratulations on your top honored win with this great write. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/3/2011 8:33:00 AM
Excellent opening line..Enjoyed..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2011 7:33:00 AM
Breathtaking and profoundly movingl, Carolyn. Congrat's on your big win. Lainie
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:50:00 AM
Coming back here to congratulate you Carolyn! Wonderfuland very stirring poem :) hugs
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Date: 2/2/2011 10:05:00 PM
I just knew this would score high, carolyn. Awesome poem and win. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:03:00 PM
Many, many congrats Carolyn on your fine win in Rick's fine contest with this lovely poem....:)
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Date: 2/2/2011 1:31:00 PM
congrats on your 1st place win, much beauty in this poignant poem - I love 'star sequins' and 'celestial curtains'
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Date: 2/2/2011 1:15:00 PM
I'm very happy to see you again in the #1 spot....obviously well deserved ......you are an accomplished writer Carolyn...well done .......best wishes Syd
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Date: 2/2/2011 12:22:00 PM
Extraordinary work for a deserving Ist Place win, Carolyn!!! 'You also rock!! Love ya! Audrey
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Date: 2/2/2011 9:49:00 AM
great 1st place result Carolyn, congratulations.
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Date: 2/2/2011 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Carolyn
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