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Evokes In My Senses

miraculous ruby sunrise at dawn, gossamer twilight mauve sunset - scintillating stars at midnight sky ..moments of divine awe, playful creepers on the fence, vermillion rose-bush in the garden ... dew drops on lotus leaves ... an almost-forgotten poignant song from the past .. reverberates. precious faces treasured and engraved in bosom for time eternal - emerge noiseless when I close my eyelids, my father’s handsome lined face with pouring love ~ waving me back at our last meet ... my mother’s kind eyes, calm and serene ~ praying ardently for everyone she knew and she did not, a little boy’s adorable face, I dreamed every night ~ missing his mother, brave and silent. sweetest friends from childhood ~ playing hide-and-seek, floating paper boats on a rainy day... angelic  children I taught ~ eyes glittered... faces lightened up when I am with them ~ found love incomparable... a magical love spreads its radiant hue, lingers in the innermost corner of my heart, symbolizing the endlessness of feelings, A love which is the source of all love ... evokes, in all my senses ... unfathomable emotions... FIRST PLACE For "I See Love" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 7/29/2021 10:55:00 AM
Quite lovely --and loving indeed, Mala-- congrats on your win!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/29/2021 11:02:00 AM
Thanks, Dear Poet. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 7/25/2021 11:11:00 AM
what touching imagery Mala, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2021 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your win. Your gratitude for untold blessings overflows in these lines. Love the first stanza filled with the glory of our world in color and the last stanza "a love which is the source of all love." A lovely poem dear Mala.
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Date: 7/25/2021 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. An amazing story/write. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 7/25/2021 12:04:00 AM
Such lovely thoughts Mala....Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/24/2021 4:47:00 PM
Congrats, Mala! What a superb imagery.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/24/2021 6:13:00 PM
Thanks, Marilene. Appreciate your encouraging comment.
Date: 7/24/2021 2:36:00 PM
you took my breath away with this, congrats on your win
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/24/2021 4:15:00 PM
WOW! I am so honoured, Dear Rose. Your themes are close to my heart. Love ~ Mala
Date: 2/8/2021 3:09:00 AM
This is lovely Malabika....I loved it...Congrats on your win :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/8/2021 4:36:00 AM
Thanks, Carol. Appreciate your lovely comment. I am sure yours is a gem - looking forward to read. Love ~ Mala
Date: 2/8/2021 2:33:00 AM
Congratulations Malabika! Beautiful poem indeed! Thanks for participating in the contest
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/8/2021 4:35:00 AM
Thanks, Dear Poet. Appreciate your inspiring words.
Date: 2/6/2021 2:22:00 PM
This is excellent imagery, Mala. Your insightful foray into the 'realm of love' is beautiful and uplifting. Your unfathomable emotions reverberate with me too! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/7/2021 6:34:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. Appreciate your inspiring and encouraging comments. Best wishes ~ Mala
Date: 2/3/2021 9:59:00 PM
Wow, Mala, poetry with classical tones reminding one of the masters of the 19th century...One can feel the love in this wondrous poem.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/4/2021 11:17:00 AM
Oh.. Harry, You are so kind! Appreciate your inspiring comments - classical tone?! OMG! Wish I had a fraction of the talents the masters were endowed with! Best wishes ~ Mala
Date: 2/3/2021 1:18:00 AM
This is magical dear Mala...Please recheck if you have entered this in that contest lest you might experience what I failed to do in my murder poem..This is too good to be forgotten. Gonna fave this..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/3/2021 7:33:00 PM
Thanks, Dear JCB, for the loveliest comments. Thanks for reminding me. Love ~ mala
Date: 2/2/2021 1:33:00 PM
wow, I loved the imagery you employed in this verse on what love for you is. For me it's just like this too! GREAT take on the contest theme.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/2/2021 2:21:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. So glad you loved the images. Really appreciate your beautiful comments, my dear friend. Love, Mala

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