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Evil Revenge

Seal pup eyed, forgiveness she cried. Mistakes were made but deceit and lies remain to blame for where she now lays. Bludgeoned to death by a word made club. Born of revenge for sins to my heart, punishment fits her backstabbing ways. She took the kicks but wasn't aware the blows came from me. Slanderous jibes to colleagues and friends tore down her life. The breakdown befits her crime to mock. She sought my shoulder. Comfort I gave; "Pills are the answer, they numb the pain. Swallow the bottle, vodka will help" Following my call tragic news came. Oh no what a shame, I won that game.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/1/2014 8:59:00 PM
It'svery deep even if I don't understand a few lines, however the parts I do understand provide a very eye-opening poem. Nice Job!
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Date: 3/25/2014 4:56:00 PM
This is awesome and definitely a 7 for me! Keep up with the excellent work. You are highly welcome to Poetry soup, a community of mind blowing, soul piercing and intrigue creating poets! I hope to check back on you again. This is really, really so good
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Rob Carter
Date: 3/27/2014 3:18:00 PM
Thanks for reading and taking time to comment. Really appreciate it Funom. Rob

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