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Evil Companion

Great it seems but constantly feeds you with bullshit gradually piles in deposit as the newly formed bad habit exhibit and remit. Its foul smelling spit is highly contagious and transmit then an innocent soul inherit with the good conscience gradually suffering a delete. Now the new creature almost reaching beyond an edit. Everything, it seems to permit even the abominable becomes legit the bad and the illicit constantly pay a visit. So far is the door to its exit an uphill task will be required to quit. Before such a line is crossed open your heavy eyes and know that the road may seem smooth in tar and tiles but its end is a large dark pit. Flee from its fleet of hungry soldiers or else, one day your throat, they will slit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/20/2014 4:46:00 AM
WONDERFUL......!!!!!
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Date: 2/22/2014 4:16:00 PM
Excellent poem... stark ending... Terry
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/23/2014 4:21:00 AM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 2/14/2014 10:51:00 AM
Sometimes it's just too easy to follow the wrong path because of a friendship or love. Wonderful write.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/14/2014 12:18:00 PM
Thanks a lot Vince Suzadail
Date: 1/27/2014 5:50:00 PM
Yeow, brutal end here, Funom. We'd had a polar frosty weekend here....was so cold the snowmen were shivering. Sometimes no comment is best?:( What had I been expecting with the title...lollipops, candycanes; the sun carrying an umbrella in case of rain? Actually, whatever topic you choose write on, you do an outstanding job! :) Keep well, Mikki
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2014 1:02:00 PM
Thanks a lot Michelle.... Its nice reading your comment.
Date: 1/11/2014 9:35:00 PM
Very interesting write here, like can relate to the last part alot, thank you for your comment on my poem called black I'm working on my elemental goddessso i appreciate feed back. cheri
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/12/2014 5:11:00 AM
No problem Cherl... I'm always here. Thanks for your comment.

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