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Down where the privet hedge's buds are white There are green blueberries upon verdant bushes They are all chilled by low temperatures at night While amaryllis' buds through earth pushes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/26/2024 4:22:00 AM
Sure, these are evidences of spring coming in giving life and color to the slumbering earth. Beautiful little poem dear Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/26/2024 6:26:00 AM
Your comments are always welcome and so delightful, Valsa. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K
Date: 4/24/2024 10:28:00 PM
Sure do love those evidences of spring!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/25/2024 3:11:00 AM
Andrea, yes there are more than one evidence of spring, and they are going on all around and there is a continuous change in what is happening in the plants with one blooming then another then another right on time. Amazing how that works. Your visit was encouraging. Sara K
Date: 4/24/2024 3:51:00 PM
a subtle and delightful spring poem, Sara K...it flowed so smoothly. With your imagery, you've captured so much in one single verse...that takes true skill. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara B.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/25/2024 3:09:00 AM
Why, thank you, Sara B, for the uplifting review. I appreciate it so much. Sara K
Date: 4/24/2024 3:50:00 PM
so beautiful and delicate poem, here is spring for eternity, thanks poet
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/25/2024 3:08:00 AM
Yann, spring minus the pollen or the allergies would be wonderful year-round. I know God knows best though. We have to have a little uncomfortable to appreciate the comfortable. Sara K
Date: 4/24/2024 11:19:00 AM
This is a wonderful spring poem dear Sara. So well written and I love the rhyme and flow.The imagery is vivid and delightful. You have captured much in one stanza - glorious nature! So enjoyed it. Blessings to you :):)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/24/2024 1:28:00 PM
Christina, I need the blessings and thanks for the smiley faces and kind review. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K
Date: 4/24/2024 5:54:00 AM
Splendid spring images, Sara. Much enjoyed the inspiring voice of the season you convey.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/24/2024 8:13:00 AM
Vijay, It took awhile to get it to say what I wanted it to say so I may not add another stanza. LOL..Your visits are so awesome. Sara K
Date: 4/24/2024 5:25:00 AM
Dear Sara, reading this poem, I couldn't help but think of the quiet beauty that surrounds us in nature, much like the green blueberries and budding amaryllis described. Despite the chill of the night, these natural wonders persist, pushing through the earth with determination and grace. The resilience and beauty emerge from adversity, much like the strength and grace I see in this poem. - Blessings, Daniel
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/24/2024 8:12:00 AM
Daniel, it always amazes me how all the beauty in nature can hold up to the extremes to which it has to contend. Your visits are always uplifting. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Date: 4/24/2024 5:16:00 AM
I love your rhymes here and how descriptive it is dear sara. As always, a very beautiful poem, and you chose the perfect picture to go with it: pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/24/2024 8:10:00 AM
Why, thank you, IE. I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K
Date: 4/24/2024 4:41:00 AM
Lovely imagery my friend.. You really know how to bring an image to life..
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/24/2024 4:52:00 AM
Why, thank you, SO. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

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