Evidence

evidence of an open heart that bleeds across the open sky like a sunset that is so alone her own beauty she cannot know

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Date: 12/30/2016 9:14:00 AM

This is great. !

Forrest Pasky
Date: 12/30/2016 10:19:00 AM

Thank you for taking time to read and comment Heidi. Have a great New Year. Forrest :)

Date: 12/30/2016 7:30:00 AM

This was sadly beautiful. I like how his feels to read.

Forrest Pasky
Date: 12/30/2016 10:26:00 AM

Thanks for reading and sharing a comment. Have a wonderful New Year. Forrest

Date: 12/30/2016 4:29:00 AM

Surreal tinge in the poem is engaging .

Forrest Pasky
Date: 12/30/2016 10:29:00 AM

Thank you Probir for taking time to read and comment. I'm getting quite a bit more familiarized with your work. Have a great New Year. Forrest

Date: 12/30/2016 3:54:00 AM

An "open heart that bleeds...like a sunset"~ very cool image Forrest.

Forrest Pasky
Date: 12/30/2016 10:31:00 AM

Thank you for taking time share comment. Have a very happy New Year Phi. Forrrest