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Everything's Beachy

A damp musk fills the salty air as gray dawn rises over the star field of night. Unseen, crows hawk the glitter of light upon the dunes of day, calling out to man and feathered friend alike to rise from within the bejeweled shades of emerald and turquoise. The scruff pines prickle an expansive horizon, lifting from the dark onyx of night scenting the still air. Stalwart oaks finger the nubile rays of gold morning edges their crenulated leaves breezes lift limbs with a rustle liken to the scratch of crinoline. Topaz acorns cascade from the crowns of oaks, homage to the placid play of summer’s end at the beach at last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/19/2012 9:32:00 AM
have a wonderful birthday Debbie, you have used many gems here,(literally) with in nature, that is clever, love the oak finger, awesome!!!!!
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Date: 9/18/2012 3:36:00 PM
I don't think you live in the city. Us city dwellers you surely must pity. Your vision in darkness depicts such insight. Poetry in motion in the dawn of the light.
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Date: 9/18/2012 2:29:00 PM
oh so merry, this one debbie... thanks for including me on your winning list.. the one i did was not cryptic, i hope, lol.. :) love and huggs.... happy brrthday, ms. virgo.. my mom's was last sept 17---may your day be just as sweet as the morning sun!.:) huggs!
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