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Everything Is Not So Right.

Graduation night. Everything was so right. But you wouldn't know, You were a no show. I cried myself to sleep that night. I held it in so long, the tears blurred my sight. You broke my heart that day. Into a million little pieces i would say. Never fail to let me down. But no longer will I frown. I have paid my dues, and I no longer have any respect for you.

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Cecil Hickman

Date: 7/15/2009 9:04:00 PM

a very sad piece and horrible action by some hurtful person to leave you stranded that way,,, I could feel both the hurt and anger written witin,,blessings..Cecil

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/14/2009 3:53:00 AM

Candice, this is truly a sad sad write. But hold your head high and be proud of yourself. Outstanding write. Love, Carol

Kakraba Afful

Date: 7/13/2009 10:10:00 AM

sharp way of identifying yourself! I like it. You're a monument of great poetry! Good luck!

James Knox

Date: 7/12/2009 3:51:00 PM

so sad, good poem :)

Frances King

Date: 7/12/2009 3:50:00 PM

You graduated into a strong woman, Candice! Enjoy your independence, and keep us posted!