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She loved the way the salty air kissed her rosy cheeks, She loved the way the warm blankets kept her safe, She loved the feeling of the soapy bubbles against her skin, She loved the sky just before sunset, The sound of the crickets as they chirped around her, The water rippling as she kicked her feet in the puddle, Her family, Her friends, The boy who would never know she existed. The boy who would never know what she loved Because even though she loved a lot of things, She couldn't love herself.

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Date: 7/17/2013 4:47:00 PM
Caryl, thank you so much for the reply. I hope you are enjoying the soup. I'm from Texas, were the weather is extremely hot. Looking forward, in reading other poems from you. xox~ SKAT
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Date: 7/18/2013 8:27:00 AM
Caryl, looking forward in your poems...
Date: 7/17/2013 7:14:00 AM
Beautifully woven poem.Wonderful stuff.I extend a warm welcome to you to poetry soup also.
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Caryl-Anne Ok
Date: 7/17/2013 4:00:00 PM
thank you so much, it means a lot.
Date: 7/16/2013 11:04:00 PM
Caryl-Anne ok, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:02:00 PM
thank you so much SKAT. this meant a lot to me. :)
Date: 7/16/2013 10:22:00 AM
-Hi, Caryl-Anne. - A good written poem. - Like it a lot. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/17/2013 4:01:00 PM
this means a lot to me, thank you.

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